I just wanted to say thanks to everyone who offered their support following my last hot-headed rant. It's obvious that the people who take the effort to check my journal are the ones whose opinions matter. So thanks guys.
Also, I'm not really sure why so many people are comparing Infatuation to PoF. PoF is, in my opinion, my magnum opus. It's the big one that people are
supposed to like. (I hope that doesn't sound conceited, by the way). I don't remember anyone comparing PoF to The Wrong Movie, or Sibling Love or any of my minor stories, so I'm not sure why Infatuation is getting all this attention. Of course, it might be the fact that it was supposed to be a replacement for PoF21. I think that hurt it big time.
In terms of James' character, I have to repeat myself and say he's difficult to write. Josh is definitely my favourite male archetype, and he was based on me in a lot of ways. James, though, was my attempt to break free from my usual, "Oh, my God, this is my
sister!" teenage, male character. In Infatuation,
he'sthe one pursuing the girl, rather than the other way around. That said, I
really don't want him to come off as desperate and pathetic. I mean, I like the fact that he's enamoured with someone he almost never thought of before, but I can't seem to get that across without making him seem like a horny wanker. I'll keep trying though.
And as for the style, it was just the easiest way to start writing again. I find that when I'm struggling to get back into writing, a candid, direct sentence will usually work. So, I was sitting there, my fingers poised over the keyboard, and I just thought: "It happens to every guy." And it flowed from there.
Finally, can people please, please, please tell me which bits of Infatuation are corny, and which are funny. I enjoy writing with a bit of humour, but if I'm just being corny then tell me. I hate people who think they're funny but are really just annoying. My friends are those people. So help me make sure I don't become one of them.
P.S. Reading PoF18 at the moment, so I'll be continuing with 21 soon. I'll also be looking for editors, but don't sign up yet; I'll mention it in a future update.